HELP PLEASE!! UC's and USC - need to cut down words!!

College Essays
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<p>if any is able to please proofread my essays for UCLA, UCB, UCSD, and USC (im applying to a Ba/MD program) i'd really really appreciate it!!!!</p>

<p>for UC's i need help cutting down the word count from 1300 to 1000</p>

<p>also some feedback in general would be good.. if you don't have time to really critique it</p>

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<p>Sure I'd be glad to take a look. PM me.
Btw, I've already submitted my UC apps.</p>