<p>My essay is weird in the sense that it is very random, about an everyday activity, and is a narrative about me doing that thing...and a bunch of random things happen, nothing out of the ordinary, leading me to think about some past events. Only at the end do i go into my thoughts and how all the events come together and what they mean.</p>
<p>A friend of mine who got into rice said that unless I make it clear what my essay is about in the beginning, nobody will read it...</p>
<p>Any comments?</p>