<p>I talk about how a certain trip affected me negatively and how I plan on approaching it differently the next time I visit. I actually visited the place last summer but this essay (which takes root from a personal essay I had written last year) refers to me visiting the place "next summer". I know it's not too big of a deal but I think it takes away from the tone a bit if I change that into "I visited again last summer."</p>
<p>Do you think it would really matter to the adcoms or somehow affect me negatively in the future? I'm not trying to dupe them or anything, it's just a matter of setting up a better note of finality and mood at the end of the essay.</p>