Is my Asian People essay cliched???

<p>I know most essays having to do with being Asian are cliched but I tried to talk about a specific moment that changed the way I thought of life and stuff and i can't even tell if it's cliched or not. </p>

<p>Can someone please look it over and tell me if it's cliched because then i will scrap it. (not class of 2013, i'm protective of my essays :P)</p>

<p>THANKS.</p>