Is my common app essay cliché?

Hey everyone :slight_smile:

I decided to write my common app essay on the third prompt (about challenging a belief or idea); because I felt it would be the best way to write about my activism. The reasons why I want to write about this particular event over a few others was because it involved changes I made at my school and the fact it in no way makes me out to be a “trouble maker”. But is this too cliché of a topic - especially considering the event I’m writing about would be listed under my extracurriculars?

Thanks for your time & stay cute~~

No topic is off limits, but tackling certain topics lowers the probability your essay will make an impression that helps your chances.

So to answer the narrow question: It depends on the changes you helped enact. Did you get your school to start recycling, or did you bring on long-term, substantive change? I’d be happy to provide feedback, but need more specific information.

@TheEssayGuy I just pm’ed you.

I would love to read your essay, PM me.

@xxteafanexx I’m editing it a little bit so I’ll PM it to you when I’m done. If you have an essay ready to read in the meantime I would love to read it :slight_smile: