<p>Ok, not just for Brown. I'm probably going to write a couple of different essays because I am not sure yet which topic is best. Writing isn't a burden for me so I don't mind. But this is the first one. I'm not gonna continue if this one needs major tweaking.</p>
<p>This is EXTREME personal info! Good thing I'm anonymous on here!</p>
<p>I'd reallllyyyy like your opinions/critiques :) I will comment your essay.</p>
<p>send it along…I’m a teacher and a parent of kids who got into top ten schools. Their essays were their ticket! <a href="mailto:zweebopp@yahoo.com">zweebopp@yahoo.com</a></p>