Is my Essay for Brown a Masterpiece?

<p>Ok, not just for Brown. I'm probably going to write a couple of different essays because I am not sure yet which topic is best. Writing isn't a burden for me so I don't mind. But this is the first one. I'm not gonna continue if this one needs major tweaking.</p>

<p>This is EXTREME personal info! Good thing I'm anonymous on here!</p>

<p>I'd reallllyyyy like your opinions/critiques :) I will comment your essay.</p>

<p>I’ll give you feedback on your essay, just PM me!</p>

<p>PM with title/prompt.</p>

<p>i’ll look into it, even though some of the purported masterpieces look kind of watered down…</p>

<p>PM, i’ll take a look.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. ( <a href="mailto:pg_16950■■■■■■■■■■■■">pg_16950■■■■■■■■■■■■</a> )</p>

<p>ill read it!</p>

<p>I’ll give you some feedback, PM me. :)</p>

<p>PM it over.</p>

<p>please pm it to me</p>

<p>send it along…I’m a teacher and a parent of kids who got into top ten schools. Their essays were their ticket! <a href="mailto:zweebopp@yahoo.com">zweebopp@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>pm me along with the prompt</p>

<p>PM me I’m starting my essays now too for Ivy league schools</p>

<p>go ahead and PM me</p>

<p>Sure, send it my way. If I read yours can you read mine? It’s personal too :)</p>

<p>PM me homie</p>

<p>I can give you feedbacks.</p>

<p>PM, I’ll give feedback.</p>

<p>PM,I’ll read it</p>

<p>Pm, I’ll check it out</p>