<p>I'd like some people to take a glance at my common app essay and give me some feedback. If you could catch some grammatical and/or any other errors that would be nice, but I'm mostly interested in whether the topic I'm writing about would appeal to admissions officers, is unique, and if you believe it would put me in a good position for admissions. Reason is, I have multiple different topics I can write about, and want to see if this one works or not. If interested just post on here or shoot me a PM!</p>
<p>Thanks in advance!</p>