<p>So I was thinking for the common app essay to write about when I had laryngitis-
I'm not sure if that's really significant or not but i would talk about how it taught me to be more patient (because I couldn't easily speak my mind- I had to wait it out) and appreciate the value of having a voice.
Is this a weak essay choice? or is there a way to make it stronger?</p>
<p>I really appreciate all suggestions and comments, thank you!</p>
<p>This is a great essay topic! But, the problem is your overall meaning of the essay. For instance, if your passion is in public speaking then I personally think the ending of your essay is perfect. Note, the beginning and ending sentences is always important in a college essay because the beginning catches the readers attention and the end is your goal that you are shooting for. Make sure you try to leave out contractions. For example instead of “don’t” write it out and say, “do not”. Sounds simple but it helps. Use strong vocabulary, makes you sound 90% smarter in your essay. For the most, DO NOT BRAG ABOUT YOURSELF readers will hate it. Trust me.</p>
<p>thank you for the feedback! what you said is very useful to me. it’s funny because I am actually a more shy person, so after thinking about what you wrote, maybe this topic is not exactly right for me, but I will keep brainstorming!</p>
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