<p>I put, "In failing, one must first make an attempt", because it shows that By failing, you must make the initial attempt?</p>
<p>I believe there was a comma: "to fail, one must first make an attempt" As a result, the infinitive is simply moved to the begging for emphasis of the author's point about failure yielding success. </p>
<p>Grammatically, this is the same as saying "one must first make an attempt to fail" but putting a comma there would make no sense imo.</p>
<p>that last setence error one in a section... IT had news... is.. I said "is" is the error b/c news is plural (thought it was trick) but thats wrong right?? according to barrons</p>
<p>news is singular.</p>
<p>Yeah i put A for the too fail one</p>
<p>Is it correct to say " the use of technology in treatment"</p>
<p>I thought it was "for the use of technology for treatment", but I think I changed it to No Error...</p>
<p>Ditto for A.</p>
<p>For the heart disease one, the answer I put had an "it" in it because I think it had no pronoun antecedent</p>
<p>Yeah, for the heart disease one I did the same thing.</p>
<p>yea for the heart disease one i thought "its" was an ambiguous pronoun</p>
<p>i think it could have referred to the conditon of coronary arteries, the research on heart disease, or technology</p>
<p>I put like 5 no errors near the end. like 3 no-errors, 1 error, then 2 no-errors</p>
<p>what did everyone get for the "failure" paragraph improvement? I didn't get any c,d,or e. strangely, i got something like aabbba</p>
<p>For the last identifying errors question, did you guys get A or E? It was something like "for the ___,...it was surprising". Can you use "for" in that case (instead of "to")?</p>
<p>for the story passage about the kid going to ireland, when he saw the peoples faces and saw his grandmother, wat was the answer anyone remembner?</p>
<p>that was the experimental section. I believe that that sentence was out of place wherever they wanted to put it so it had to be deleted</p>
<p>what is the answer to the sentence ID question with the bus and the detour?</p>
<p>i put no error i think</p>
<p>^oooooo yay!! i hope ur right.</p>
<p>^ yeah i hope you're right for that one too, haha, that's what i put.</p>
<p>was the one with "either aesthetic or intellectual appeal" (something like that) nothing wrong?</p>
<p>lol it's great, how the SAT gives us a passage on failing... and basically everyone i know who scores high on these sorts of things walk out of the room and say... "i failed..."
hah</p>
<p>And yeah, carsonne! i got that! but it was such a weird sentence, i had to read it over 10 times before i got that it was technically a correct sentence.</p>