JHU Pre-College Essay

College Essays
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<p>I'm crushed for time and completely bs'ed this essay. They said they wanted an excerpt that reflected my personality but most of the work I have saved are unbiased, dry academic works, so I wrote a new short essay. The financial aid for this program is over and I asked for a small extension, which I was given.</p>

<p>So, to cut to the chase, would anyone mind reading my essay and criticising? It's only requiredment is 2500 character -- I only have about 100 left. I'll PM you if you would like to help me.</p>

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<p>PM it to me and I'll take a look.</p>

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<p>Oh, in case you're wondering who you're sending your message to, I'm a senior at a private high school in the midwest. I do well in English classes (I've even won an award from the english dept.) and I'm into college already so I won't take your essay idea or anything crazy like that.</p>

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<p>ferris, I sent you a copy via PM. Would anyone else like to help me out?</p>

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<p>I would, PM me it.</p>

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<p>Castel, I've PM'ed you a copy. WOuld anyone else like to help me out?</p>

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<p>I'll read it if you'll PM it to me. I'm a senior in HS as well, but I'm not applying to JHU, and I'm the editor-in-chief of my school's paper.</p>