June 2010 Writing

<p>Unfortunately no. I am not good at remembering questions :(</p>

<p>What was the other no error?</p>

<p>Several people have said that they got no error for 29. We agreed that the sentence “That they got critiqued didnt surprise them…” was no error.</p>

<p>Either #29 is the second no error or #29 is about the critique which means that there is some other question that people think is no error.</p>

<p>can someone clear this up?</p>

<p>I think number 24 was the question about that black dude making a integrated town in Pennsylvania?</p>

<p>thanks usernamee.</p>

<p>the right column was (i think):
top-right: stonehege question — error in verb tense
middle-right: Chinese emporer — should be “all other types”
bottom-right: i think this was the one that was “have went” and should be “have gone”</p>

<p>i am not 100% sure that any of the above 3 were indeed errors.
Was it one of those three usernamee?</p>

<p>Hmmm, i think the Philadelphia one might have been the right column, and the error was in “intent about” and it should be “intent on”</p>

<p>Can someone please remind me what the #29 was?</p>

<p>@ccuser…no none of those…i put errors for all of them…were there 4 in a column?</p>

<p>was it the guy in Philadelphia?</p>

<p>from what someone else remembers:
"this dude formed a community in philadelphia (or is it illinois?) very few were there?</p>

<p>do you guys remember section 10 number 1
i was debating between “made” and “; he…”</p>

<p>i just went back and amassed all posts specifically about the Philadelphia question: [The</a> dude who made the institut - Anonymous - FDauq1Ua - ■■■■■■■■■■■■](<a href=“http://■■■■■■■■■■■■/FDauq1Ua]The”>http://■■■■■■■■■■■■/FDauq1Ua)</p>

<p>seems that “intent about” was the error</p>

<p>CONSOLIDATED LIST (non-experimental)
-please confirm, correct, improve, elaborate wherever you can
-Venus Williams section was experimental
-currently thinking there was ONE no error</p>

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<p>IMPROVING SENTENCES (0/11)</p>

<p>ERROR IDENTIFICATION (13/18)
compared Jupiter’s weather to Earth — “Earth” should be “that of Earth”
Although …, but … — Although is redundant so answer is A
sister and I put our hand in lake — should be “hands”
three things were being compared and “more” was used — should be “most”
Stonehenge question — “has been” wrong tense
a woman who would have “went” to college — should be “would have gone”
women became a person in their own right — plurality mismatch on “a person”
… one …, you — pronoun inconsistency, “you” is the error
Number of something, …, “are growing” — should be “is growing”
intent about — should be “intent on”
enjoyed opera more than all types of performance — should be “all other types”
molars question – pay attention to</p>

<h1>29 = “That their works were criticized by famous artist who … no surprise to …” — no error</h1>

<p>PARAGRAPH BASED (6/6)
In my case…
insert after the first sentence about scientists, i think #8
delete the sentence
“They also” purr when they are stressed
Cats purr when content; for example, my cat…</p>

<h2>“seems to be the one” –> “is certainly plausible”</h2>

<p>SECTION 10 (3/14)
Dinosaur question — term…,was coined in year #, though scientists knew.</p>

<h1>12 D “as a result of either”</h1>

<h2>Draconian question(#13) Fine as is. “as is indicated by…” A</h2>

<p>dude how do you remember all that ****?</p>

<p>it is an accumulation of people’s contributions. someone started the list and people kept adding on</p>

<p>I thought the molars question – pay attention to was an improving sentences question</p>

<p>@jlewis24 can you tell me which section it was in (10 minute or 25 minute)? thanks.</p>

<p>please respond if you remember section 10 number 1:)</p>

<p>I feel like it was just a past tense form of a verb. made? broke?</p>

<p>i vaguely remember “made”. Not 100% sure though.</p>

<p>what do you guys think my score will be:
either 47 raw/10 essay or 48 raw/10 essay</p>

<p>I don’t think I’ve missed any so far. I’m hoping for 10+ on the essay. Tough ones: the “either” question, the one that began with “that,” and hmm I’m probably forgetting a few but I think it went very well.</p>