<p>I just finished my response to the first option. I am really at a loss if this is the kind of thing UChicago might be looking for. But honestly, it really is my top choice right now, and I really hope I make it in.</p>
<p>So are there any current college students/grads out there who might be willing to take a look and give me their advice?</p>
<p>If you're an 09er student or parent, please don't post here, thanks!=) I'm not trying to be rude, but I mean you probably already know how it is with the increasing competition and everything.</p>