Looking for essay readers! CommonApp

<p>Prompt #1
Topic: My bicultural background
Word Count: 648</p>

<p>I would appreciate it if anyone could read over and critique my essay. Please inform me if it answers the prompt or if the content is not clear enough. Give me any suggestions, criticisms, and corrections. Preferably someone who is an Adult or College Student!</p>

<p>Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>I can read it if you want. I’m a high school senior.</p>

<p>I can read. I’m also a senior, though.</p>

<p>I can read if need be</p>

<p>I forgot to mention PM is not enabled for me yet so could readers provide me with different median of sending my essay. Thank you. (Sorry for the inconvenience)</p>

<p>I’d love to read it!</p>