Looking for some essay readers!

<p>Hello, I'm looking for some essay readers. I would like for people who volunteer to read it to help me try to trim my essay down to as close to 500 words as possible from the 609 words currently. I would also love for everyone to be the harshest critic out there, too. Leaving me a message if you want to help :D!</p>

<p>i’l love too
though i’d like to warn you, i can be brutal (or so i’ve been told, i personally dont think i’m that harsh) xD</p>

<p>I’ll help you out! I can be brutally honest without degrading your self esteem.</p>

<p>I’d be happy to help you :)</p>

<p>I would love to help out.</p>

<p>hmm do you feel like your common app essay should be as close to 500 as possible or something?</p>

<p>I will post a link on here to my other thread to show you why…and I’m down to 563 already. I’ll post that link when I’m on my comp not my phone.</p>

<p>i know i read the other thread. But i think you shouldn’t stress yourself in getting it from 563 to 500. Ive chopped mine down to 640 and I’m content with what I’ve written. But everybody is different so whatever floats your boat</p>

<p>sure PM it to me</p>

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>