<p>nope section “3” for me.</p>
<p>I don’t think the penguins question was in number 10, right?</p>
<p>She won the votes as either a result of x or y.</p>
<p>I put this.</p>
<p>^
That is an idiom error.
As a result should go before either or the sentence needs to state a result again, which it didnt. </p>
<p>That’s why as a result either … or … fits because nothing needs to be restated.</p>
<p>Does anyone remember that one with two friends criticizing poetry one?</p>
<p>agreed, theres no colon.</p>
<p>the penguin was in section “3.” i had 3 and 7 experimental writing, and i definitely remember the penguin being in the first section.</p>
<p>What are more things from the experimental section?</p>
<p>^ That’s what I put, the one WITHOUT the semicolon.</p>
<p>Yea penguin one is section 3. Sorry. </p>
<p>Also meadow</p>
<p>The answer started with the name. it was like Susan and Mary … wrote children’s books together.</p>
<p>For the essay i wrote about George W. Bush…lol</p>
<p>“…suggesting planning, insight, perhaps even use of tools”</p>
<p>this wasnt an answer as far as a remember, i put “this behavior suggests” or something to that effect. they all sounded similar, so it’s the entire phrase i’m looking for</p>
<p>also unsure about the medieval question</p>
<p>Consolidated Writing Section </p>
<p>Section (Long):</p>
<p>Sentence Improvement:
The emperor penguin [__], the average standing at 45 inches tall. Answer was C. </p>
<p>No Errors (There were 3):
Hikers that went through the forest with the canopy (top right of first page)
Indian writer that used colloquial English (middle right of first page)
Unathletic boy who became adept at Ultimate Frisbee (bottom left of second page)</p>
<p>Idiom Errors:
succeeded in –> should be succeeded at</p>
<p>Redundancy Errors:
return back (top right of second page)</p>
<p>Subj/Verb:
abundances —> abundance</p>
<p>Tense:
Had went
Have —> Had (romans concrete)</p>
<p>Paragraph Improvement:
However —> therefore
suggesting planning, insight, perhaps even use of tools —> suggests planning …
Number 35 —> sentence should be placed after sentence 14. Answer E. </p>
<p>Section 10:
Last 5 answers were E - D - E - E - E
Elections as a result of either … or …
Portraits question (last one) was misplaced modifier. Answer was E.
but, according to (other answers had comma splices)</p>
<p>I don’t think the penguin one was in section 10 but i think i got C.</p>
<p>criticizing poetry? the one where they ended writing a few stories together?</p>
<p>it was the one choice where “miranda” (is that her name?), the second subject/person, was placed earlier in the sentence compared to the other choices. i’m pretty sure only thats the one made any sense at all.</p>
<p>Can anyone explain 14 on sec 10. I picked the one starting with depictions. it was c. I couldn’t figure it out.</p>
<p>sorry it was *mary</p>
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<p>Definite? I think I put this, than changed to E. Or maybe this was E?</p>
<p>I put “her portraits” to maintain parallelism.</p>
<p>Although they hate eachother, Susan and Mary write children’s stories together.
What section was this question: 3 or 10?</p>
<p>^Section 10.</p>