<p>@Josh66</p>
<p>I got sentence 14.</p>
<p>it was “nevertheless” should be replaced by “therefore”</p>
<p>Sentence 14 I think, cause the first set of experiments (the maze and opening the can) didn’t have anything to do with group observation (or whatever the technical name was) where the red/white marbles did.</p>
<p>It was sentence 8.</p>
<p>Sentence 14 is correct</p>
<p>Agree with 3 NE’s</p>
<p>what was the answer to the one where it was:
_______ planning, insight, perhaps even use of tools</p>
<p>(paragraph revisions)</p>
<p>The question I didn’t know was in the octopus passage. ______ foresight,…, and the use of tools.
I put that “it required” or something along those lines.</p>
<p>What do you think the curve will be-harsh, medium or generous?</p>
<p>I put this data suggested or something like that for the foresight one.</p>
<p>Consolidated List - NO EXPERIMENTAL ANSWERS</p>
<p>Essay prompt: Should leaders of countries or groups be held to the same standards as everyone else?</p>
<p>Long Section:</p>
<p>Sentence improvement:
penguins, something about experts asserting something
director: were he to be given</p>
<p>Error ID: 3 No Errors: (14, 16, 21) hiking in the forest, canopy. Chetwan Bhagat, Indian novelist, colloquial english. Not being athletic, ultimate frisbee.
return back, error
musicians in an ensemble: soloist
flock question: arrive
vacation: had went
succeeded on
cathedrals/concrete/romans: have</p>
<p>Paragraph Improvement:
therefore-> nevertheless
Last question: sentence should be placed after sentence 14
…suggesting planning, insight, perhaps even use of tools</p>
<p>Short section:</p>
<p>elections: as a result of either…
portraits: her portrait…
Queen Nefertiari: number is
EDEEE (10-14)
No C’s in the short section? (unconfirmed)</p>
<p>Note: involve/evolve = experimental</p>
<p>Consolidated Writing Section </p>
<p>No Errors (There were 3):
Hikers that went through the forest with the canopy (top right of first page)
Indian writer that used colloquial English (middle right of first page)
Unathletic boy who became adept at Ultimate Frisbee (bottom left of second page)</p>
<p>Idiom Errors:
succeeded in –> should be succeeded at</p>
<p>Redundancy Errors:
return back (top right of second page)</p>
<p>Subj/Verb:
abundances —> abundance</p>
<p>Tense:
Had went
Have —> Had (romans concrete)</p>
<p>Paragraph Improvement:
However —> therefore
Last question: sentence should be placed after sentence 8/14 ****UNDECIDED</p>
<p>Section 10:
Last 5 answers are EDEEE</p>
<p>No C’s in Section 10/Short Section.</p>
<p>i think it’ll be medium to harsh. quite a few of the ID’s especially were pretty simple to get, which is going to bring up the average. when you create standard deviations, the curve has to be pretty tough to get a normal distribution, assuming that’s how they do it.</p>
<p>I like your format better, hotinpursuit. Carry the flag!</p>
<p>@jubilant crap I had a question about that one too but I don’t remember my answer. I narrowed it down to 2. If someone remembers the answers PLEASE post them.</p>
<p>I dont remember “succeeded in” question, but the idiom is correct as it is (its not succeeded at). Can someone repeat what the question was to their fullest recollection?</p>
<p>Also what was this question about abundances? can someone repeat that as well?</p>
<p>what about the question in the last section about penguins’ heights</p>
<p>It was like</p>
<p>[something about penguins], the average one standing [#] inches tall</p>
<p>something like that</p>
<p>what was the answer?</p>
<p>Can we decide whether the last question, number 35, was After Sentence 8 or 14?</p>
<p>I put 14 because after 8 it seemed relevant. But I don’t really remember the sentence though.</p>
<p>what was the sentence like for the return error id question</p>
<p>“elections: as a result of either…”</p>
<p>Anyone remember the letter? I think I put A but I really don’t remember.</p>
<p>It was sentence 14. 'Twas something like: Therefore, the experiments prove…</p>