May 2012 essay help

<p>Ok, so I had the one about feelings/actions(saw some other people had different ones)and felt really confident at the testing center. Now....not so sure. Here's the examples I used: my aunt who had amazing musical abilities and feelings, but chose to sit around and not do anything about them, and my dad who always dreamed of saving lives in the coast guard and acted on those feelings. Overall, I think it's well written. I took up one page (I write small) using four paragraphs. What do you guys think? Any help would be appreciated...lthanks!</p>