<p>I’d appreciate some critique. :)</p>
<p>pm it on over</p>
<p>i'll read it!</p>
<p>pm me i'd love to read it.</p>
<p>pm it hear</p>
<p>id be happy to read it</p>
<p>pm it to me. i'm not a perfect critic but still i hope i can give you some insight la</p>
<p>i'll read it</p>
<p>ill read it</p>
<p>i'll read it too-- i finished all my penn essays</p>
<p>i will.........</p>
<p>i can read it for u and provide u feedback.</p>
<p>I would really like to offer you a critique. I'll be honest I just wrote mine as well would you mind looking at it? I was quite specific in the essay so it might be too much.</p>
<p>sure. ill read it</p>
<p>sure pm me</p>
<p>yeah i'll read</p>
<p>send it to me too if u want</p>
<p>me too if you haven't submitted the app already.</p>
<p>uhh, yeah...if you still need to, you can pm me</p>
<p>I can read it too if you want.</p>