mediocre essay...could use help

College Essays
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<p>Georgia Techs admission deadline is in a week and I have every thing done but the essay, which I am having trouble with.</p>

<p>It starts off pretty OK, but from there it just doesn't go anywhere.</p>

<p>The essay topic is:
Describe the personal experience that gave you the feeling of greatest achievement or satisfaction because of the challenges you met.</p>

<p>I really could use help from someone who is good at this, and knows their way around admissions essays, preferably not someone applying this year.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance</p>

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<p>PM it it me, but only if you want it really edited, not just approved....</p>

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<p>OK, I PM'ed it to you hpg80</p>

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<p>PM me--I'll read it.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it if you still need some eyes.</p>

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<p>pm it to me? I usually come up with good advice on writing, although this will be the first time i give advice over CC.</p>

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<p>Thanks for the offer guys, but I decided I am going to completely rewrite the essay.</p>

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<p>^ Oy vey!
All I have to say is: GOOD LUCK and be sure to finish on time!</p>

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<p>pffft... already finished it. Much better this time (or so it seems to me).
I need one more volunteer to read it now. Anyone?</p>

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<p>I'll read it--PM me.</p>