My Actual 12 SAT Essay

<p>I've received some pretty useful help on this forum over the years, so I hope this will help others.
Below is my essay from October 2009, which received a 12.</p>

<h2>Good luck on your SATs.</h2>

<p>Prompt: “Both in society and in our own lives, today's problems are serious and require serious solutions. Increasingly, however, people are taught to laugh at things that aren't usually funny and to cope with difficult situations by using humor. They are even advised to surround themselves with funny people. There is strong evidence that laughter can actually improve health and help fight disease.”
- Adapted from Marshall Brain, "How Laughter Works"</p>

<h2>Is using humor the best way to approach difficult situations and problems? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.</h2>

<p>Since the dawn of time, many human traits have been established. One of the most prominent is laughter, and since ancient times it has been used by jesters and comedians as entertainment. Today, a number of studies suggest that laughter can even reduce stress and improve health. Indeed, an analysis of leaders, past and present, reveals that humor is the best way to approach difficult issues.</p>

<p>A prominent leader of today is recently retired President George W. Bush. Although not well received by many pundits, Bush’s presidency was a difficult one. Almost a year after he took office, the US was attacked by terrorists amidst a larger economic crisis. Bush passed the Patriot Act, created the Department of Homeland Security, and employed other means to secure the national security. He also began military initiatives in Iraq and Afghanistan that became controversial wars. In the media, Bush is shown to be a laughing and joking politician. In fact, during perhaps the lowest point of his presidency, he was attacked by an Iraqi journalist with a shoe. Bush quickly shrugged off the incident and made a joke out of this indication of his low reputation abroad. Through his humorous ways, he has prevented other attacks on American soil. Bush’s presidency shows that humor is the best way to attack any situation.</p>

<p>Another prominent leader is Founding Father Benjamin Franklin. Franklin played a critical role in the American Revolution by securing an alliance with France. At the time, France was an aristocracy-ruled society dominated by the lavish court of King Louis XVI. Franklin successfully and humorously blended into the French social scene, charmed influential figures, and entertained his way to an extensive military and economic treaty. Franklin’s humorous approach to diplomacy shows how humor can be applied to a serious problem.</p>

<p>A third leader is President Franklin D. Roosevelt. FDR served during the Great Depression and World War Two. A rich and dilettantish “mama’s boy,” FDR knew how to charm the American people through jokes and fireside chats. He bolstered public morale during a period of world changing disasters and successfully guided America out of the Great Depression and WWII. By the time he died, the US had emerged as the new superpower. FDR revealed how humor is essential to solving difficult problems.</p>

<p>As Marshall Brain once noted, one should “cope with difficult situations by using humor.”</p>

<p>thank you so much :)</p>

<p>Did you not have a concluding paragraph? Thanks</p>

<p>^ I had 2 lines left so I could only squeeze in a sentence.</p>

<p>Nice essay. Thank you for posting it. Did you consider using President Reagan? ie after he was shot Reagan told the doctors, “I hope you are all Republicans.”</p>

<p>Is it required that you use specific examples to receive a 12? I realized that I didn’t use any in my Dec 5 essay, and now I’m worried =/</p>

<p>do you have a repository of set examples that you choose from?</p>

<p>if you do… care to share? :)</p>

<p>^I’m sorry but I don’t.
And I didn’t think of Regan that day.</p>

<p>How I got my examples:
Dubya: lol
Ben Franklin: We were watching John Adams (the HBO series) in class that week, the episode where Adams goes to Versailles and meets up with Franklin.
FDR: Ben Franklin…Franklin…Franklin…Franklin D. Roosevelt!</p>

<p>hey everyone. i am new to this forum and i have a question. </p>

<p>i hear that people already have ‘pre-made’ templates that they will use. they think of the most common topics and make ‘templates’ that they essentially plug-in for the essay.</p>

<p>do you guys do this? and do you recommend this? thanks</p>

<p>I do…</p>

<p>read this. <a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/sat-preparation/645763-how-write-12-essay-just-10-days.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/sat-preparation/645763-how-write-12-essay-just-10-days.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>so, it says you need 25 examples. So, should these examples be of various topics? Like, what I mean is, how will 25 examples encompass all possible topics? Like, is it possible to have 25 and cover all topics? And when we pick 25, do we pick 4 for essay prompt about honesty, then 4 for something like ‘do we learn from our mistakes’ and then 4 for something such as ‘is technology good or bad’? OR do we pick 25 examples and make sure that each of those examples can be used for more than just one prompt?</p>

<p>I’m just a little confused. And also, wouldn’t this take very long to memorize? Are the only things that you need to memorize the examples? OR do you need to know the entire template for each possible prompt? </p>

<p>Also, is there a list or something of the most common/predictable prompts? </p>

<p>Thanks a lot. I’m just starting to prep for the SAT. Bad idea i started this late, i’m in grade 11 lol and i plan to write in March or so, and i want to get around 2150, 2200 would be great. I got 1930 in my first diagnostic SAT practice test at home, but I only got 610 in CR and 650 in Writing. My math was low too 670. Hopefully a solid essay will help me greatly!</p>

<p>I didn’t use specific examples and I got a 10. But if you are looking for a 12, then idk.</p>

<p>The essay was beautifully written. But…</p>

<p>Bush quickly shrugged off the incident and made a joke out of this indication of his low reputation abroad. Through his humorous ways, he has prevented other attacks on American soil.</p>

<p>I love how you jumped from ignoring a joke to preventing attacks… lol</p>

<p>If it helps, here’s my essay from the October 2009 SAT as well. I went brain dead for a couple minutes at the start, but then I cranked out some culture I learned in Latin class… It’s not really accurate at all, but it did the job. My writing took up both pages, and I also received a score of 12. </p>

<p>**Prompt: Is using humor the best way to approach difficult situations and problems? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations. **</p>

<p>Society has had many difficult problems it has to deal with, but there are often solutions to these problems that are not so serious. Martial was a great Latin poet in the time of Rome’s heyday. Although Rome was a thriving empire, it still possessed numerous social and political issues, and Martial helped to right these wrongs with his humorous, but serious, epigrams.</p>

<p>In Roman times, doctors were treated poorly because they had no formal education in their field. They would often resort to primitive practices, such as bleeding patients in hope of curing them of their disease. Martial reflected on this practice when he said, “You sir, used to be a doctor, but now you are a murderer,” revealing the severity of Roman medicinal practices in his time. Martial likens the work of Roman doctors to that of murderers because their patients were more often killed than saved, and the humor evident in his poetry helped the Romans realize how inexperienced their doctors truly were by leading to a variety of health reform laws.</p>

<p>Martial was an excellent Roman poet, but other poets in his time were not as well-versed. Nero was an emperor of Rome who fancied poetry as a hobby, but to the dismay of his subjects, he was a horrid poet. He would make the populace sit through his recitations, and no one would be able to criticize him for his lack of talent, lest they be condemned to death for speaking out against the emperor. Martial, however, took a rather jovial approach to the issue of Nero’s awful poetry. In one epigram he stated, “Why do you wear wool on your neck? The wool is probably better for our ears.” Martial did not specifically mention Nero in this epigram, but he made his reference clear because Nero wore woolen scarves while he recited his works. As a result, the Roman people knew they were not alone in their contempt for Nero, and this epigram is hailed by some as a direct cause for Nero’s assassination by the Roman people.</p>

<p>Martial tackled many Roman issues simply by writing humorous lines of poetry to show his views on the topic. The Roman people appreciated his work, as it put their dilemmas in a humorous light and made life easier to deal with. Tiberius, Nero’s successor, was an avid reader of Martial’s laugh-provoking epigrams, and he promoted Martial to the position of consul, the post second-highest to emperor, to show the gratification of the Roman people to his work.</p>

<p>Many Romans were afraid to openly criticize social and political issues, and question the way things were done. It is in this regard that Martial is able to distinguish himself, as he not only helped to correct society’s plethora of problems, but he did so with humor in such a successful fashion.</p>

<p>@ col how come you used 3 historical examples though? are you allowed to do that?
1 thought u have to interchange with historical, literal, or personal
but personal examples are rarely strong so forget personal</p>

<p>but col u didnt use literary?</p>

<p>Kind of old post, but some questions for Col: </p>

<p>1) Is it okay to use examples from literature? Do literary and historical examples carry equal weight? </p>

<p>2) How did you get away with no conclusion? </p>

<p>3) Thank you so much.</p>