My amazing commonapp essay about the greatest experience of my life

<p>Who wants to read it?</p>

<p>no 2010ers</p>

<p>can somebody critique it and tell me if i answered the question</p>

<p>Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.</p>

<p>Also grammatical errors and if I can cut down.</p>

<p>PM it over!</p>

<p>pm me
ill read</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you want a 4th opinion</p>

<p>PM it to me if you still need readers to critique it.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look if you’d like… Just PM it over and I’ll look through it</p>

<p>I’d love to read… although I tend to give back feedback more voluminous than the essay itself</p>

<p>pm it to me</p>

<p>I can comment on it; PM me it.</p>

<p>I’ve been posted my essay, but no1 has read it. If any would like to read my essay just email me @ <a href="mailto:javaughn_lawrence@yahoo.com">javaughn_lawrence@yahoo.com</a> and I’ll send it to you.</p>

<p>This is for QuestBridge?</p>

<p>hey </p>

<p>I am a 2014er but applying for engineering (see my chance thread). If you are not applying for the same subject, then our essays are waaay diff coz all my essays are abt my passion for engineering.</p>

<p>If you want, you could PM it over.</p>

<p>Regards</p>

<p>ill read!!</p>

<p>so many 2010ers</p>

<p>Hey PM it over, I’ll be happy to read it for you. :slight_smile: I’m in college, so no worries!</p>

<p>pm, please!
i was 2008er</p>

<p>pass the essay my way if you need additional feedback</p>

<p>Sure; PM it over! I’m in college and it’s summer so I have nothing to do. :)</p>