Need a second opinion on the quality of my Common App essay.

<p>I'll PM it to anyone who asks. I'm too scared to just post it out in the open, even though it would probably get me more input haha.
I mostly just need to know if it's any good. You don't have to reply with a full critique (although any suggestions will be appreciated)</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you are interested. I have read a few lately to provide that second opinion. </p>

<p>I am happy to review your essay and provide some feedback.</p>