<p>Firstly, what are my chances at University of Florida, Florida State University, and Northeastern University.</p>
<p>Secondly, particularly if the schools above are no match, what schools should I apply to. Im looking for a strong business school and my intended major is accounting.</p>
<p>Note: I have an awkward high school record considering how my grades plummeted in junior year and for the one year gap between high school graduation and entrance to college. This will clearly negatively affect my admission, but I have made an attempt to explain the reason behind it on a personal statement. </p>
<p>My High School record is as follow:</p>
<p>Hispanic Male</p>
<p>Scanned Picture of my Transcript:
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<p>GPA: 3.32</p>
<p>SAT: This I believe will be the biggest factor. I will be re-taking it on November 6 and Im hoping for a 1200. Being a bit skeptical, I will say 1150 for now. As you see, I blotted out the score on my transcript since it was so bad. Also, I will be taking the December ACT and hoping for a 24.</p>
<p>ECs:
JV Football and Track
National Spanish Honor Society 9-12
Employment during junior year
Co-op Program in senior year</p>
<p>Letter of Recommendation:<a href="using%20John%20Smith%20in%20place%20of%20my%20real%20name">i</a>*
This letter was written for my UF application. He has agreed to use the same layout for all my other schools of choice
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Dear Admissions Committee:</p>
<p>I am very pleased to recommend Mr. John Smith for admittance to your undergraduate program at the University of Florida. I have known Mr. Smith for two years. I served as his supervisor when he was a member of the Clear Creek High School Office Education Program, a cooperative program with the University of Houston-Clear Lake (UHCL). The Office Education Program is reserved for outstanding high school students who have achieved academic excellence. In his position at UHCL, he handled admirably the various job assignments that required independent and cooperative work styles, analytical thinking, organization, and technology skills.</p>
<p>Mr. Smith has the energy and commitment to undertake this undergraduate study. He is a self-starter and a leader who takes the initiative in completing projects. He demonstrates a professional demeanor among colleagues, exercising genuine respect and appreciation for them. He works well both independently and in collaboration with others. He would gain extensive knowledge from your prestigious University, and at the same time he would contribute to the educational process, bringing his academic strengths and workplace experience to the classroom.</p>
<p>Sincerely,</p>
<p>-His Name-.
Associate Professor & Coordinator
Educational Management Program
University of -
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<p>Personal Letter to Admission committee explaining why my grades dropped and for my delay in the application process for college. (Please feel free to offer suggestions on ways to change it)</p>
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Because of the awkward conditions of my application, I felt it was essential to include a letter of explanation in why my grades descended towards my last two years of high school, and for the period of time spent after graduation before my final decision to apply for college.</p>
<p>When, five years ago, my father merged his small distribution business with a local competitor's, the new business partner quickly began to commit fraudulent acts with the intent of forcing my father out of the company and becoming the sole manager. In November of 2002, after having begun a legal battle with his partner, my father was attacked by three assailants outside his office. Fearing for our safety, I-then a senior in high school-and my mother moved to Miami where many of our relatives lived, while my father stayed in Houston to run the business and continue the legal fight. </p>
<p>This upheaval seriously put my college plans in jeopardy. No longer in Houston, I was forced to complete my studies through the Texas Technical High School's extended studies program. By that time, my father was in immense financial debts due to legal fees and, to help support my household, I began holding a full-time job. I used what little free time I had to send my completed assignments back to Texas by mail. Although it was delayed for a year due to my job and the stresses of the past events, I earned my diploma in July of 2004. </p>
<p>Applying to college became a very complicated decision. My father recommended that I join the military, which, through the GI Bill, would pay for college tuition. This meant, though, that my enrollment would be delayed for four years. Community college was also out of the question because of the transportation expenses; my family could no longer afford car insurance, and I was worried that holding a job as a full-time student would negatively impact my education. I decided that attending a college where I could live on campus was my best option. I would be fully independent from my parents and, through grants and student loans, it wouldn't be a financial burden. By that point, I had unfortunately already missed the application deadlines and would have to wait till 2005 to enroll.</p>
<p>I understand, however, that the challenges I've faced are not insurmountable. Most importantly, my family is safe and, as for myself, I am confident that I will be able to pursue my educational goals. Equally rewarding is my own personal development. I know what it's like to cope with disappointment and uncertainty. I understand how to be patient and wait for years to satisfy a desire. And, because of all the effort I've put in, I have no doubt that college is the right choice for me. I've been through a lot, but I can see my success in sight; nothing exceptional, I've learned, can be had without a challenge.</p>
<p>Sincerely,
John Smith
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<p>I also want to add that I will be putting a lot of effort on the admission essays.</p>
<p>Thank you all!!</p>