<p>Describe a place you feel perfectly content?
Does anyone wanna my VERY rough, possibly incomplete draft. I'm not sure If I should continue with this topic or start over because it doesn't seem to be going anywhere. I have a pretty good opening and closing but the middle doesn't really flow or sound good at all. It's only 359 words so far and common app allows 650. My rough draft is due on Wednesday for english and I wanted to finish it today. </p>
<p>I will read and give feedback, if you’d like an adult opinion.</p>