my new UC college essay outline

<p>okay so a little background info:
im indian and i want to be a pharmacist. but in my essay i want to write about preaching.</p>

<p>my second essay topic is on public speaking and how i overcame that in a sense.</p>

<p>and the first one was either me talking about going to india and helping people, or
two) talk about this old man who was a role model to me. (he was a preacher of hinduism, basically), a simple man, with a lot of tension yet, didnt show anything. he gave powerful lectures.. etc.</p>

<p>here are the prompts:
Prompt #1 (freshman applicants)</p>

<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>Prompt #2 (all applicants)</p>

<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>so jest as a re-cap: prompt one i want to talk about either: 1) going to india and experiencing the poverty there, and helping and growing, etc. dream of a big mansion down to a small home.</p>

<p>or 2. talk about this preacher i knew, and how i consider him my role model. etc.</p>

<p>and for prompt 2: i want to talk about public speaking... how i overcame my social lonliness, etc </p>

<p>im open to changing things around too.. do please help me..
my college goals are UCSD, UCB, and UCLA.. help me :)</p>

<p>another person mentioned this to me so this is clarifying what i want exactly:</p>

<p>i dont WANT ANYONE TO WRITE MY ESSAY.
i just want to know if these ideas fit the prompt. like to confirm it, thats all.</p>

<p>It sounds like they ****ing do! Dont be a dumbass and just write the goddamn things</p>

<p>you’re a writer…good job on getting into ucb.</p>