<p>Here is my #1 UC personal statement. Topic:Describe the world you come from, for example, your family, community or school, and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations. </p>
<p>I included some humor ideas, but I don't know if this is appropriate.
Most importantly, I'm not really sure if I'd answered the question correctly.</p>
<p>Wourld anyone be willing to proff read my essay?</p>