My Penn essay - Pg 217 of 300 pg Autobiography

College Essays
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<p>Reply here and I'll PM you.
:)</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look at it tonight if you want me to.</p>

<p>email it to me as an attachment. <a href="mailto:missmibster@yahoo.com">missmibster@yahoo.com</a></p>

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<p>Weeeeeee pmpmpmpmpmpm!!!</p>

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<p>I’ll take a peek
I’m a 2014er but im not applying to Penn</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, PM me.</p>

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<p>PM me I will take a look</p>

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<p>PM me pls, dying to read it</p>

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<p>PM ME! I’m writing it too!</p>

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<p>pm and ill look over it</p>

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<p>Id love to take a look</p>

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<p>Sure why not</p>

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<p>I PMed a couple of you.</p>

<p>Most people are telling me they like it a lot. </p>

<p>My main concern is: does it reveal enough about me?</p>

<p>Some said so becasue it shows my quirky personality about changing names and what not and my creative ability to make up characthers.</p>

<p>Some said no because it just tells about fake characthers and not me.</p>

<p>This is an optional supplemental essay so would it be ok to not reveal enough about me? Or should I try and add more about me?
Thanks.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, PM me.</p>

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<p>ill critique…PM it over.</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it…&&&& i’m NOT applying to UPenn, but i’ll critique it</p>

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<p>PM
PM
PM
Pleasee</p>

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<p>paki786 clear your inbox! it says its full. :P</p>

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<p>I wrote mine, too, and could use some help.</p>

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<p>Pm it to me</p>

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<p>sure. i can definitely tell you if you are going in the right direction
pm me.</p>