<p>Ok, this is the fourth draft for my personal statement. The only thing that concerns me is that after 4 times of making revisions, it added up to 921 words.
Anyone interested in reading my essay and consulting me how to abridge it?
And please comment to the detail. Be harsh too.<br>
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you </p>
<p>An international Yale lover ^^</p>
<p>I'll read it! PM it to me. I'm a junior BTW</p>
<p>PM it to me! I'll help you out.</p>
<p>PM me and i'll give u feedback.</p>
<p>PM it to me! I've read quite a few other essays already.</p>
<p>ok, tell me what you guys think.</p>
<p>PM it to me too.</p>
<p>BTW, it there a word limit for the Common Essay?
Cuz I only know of the minimum words(250).</p>
<p>PM me (i am a '08er and got into yale last year)</p>
<p>PM me! I'll read it=)</p>
<p>PM me! I'd love to read it.</p>
<p>I'll be happy to read it as well, if you want an 8th corrector... the more the merrier,right? :-)</p>
<p>Dear megavortex7, 1a1, PolarNs, LiveLoveRun,</p>
<p>It's been a week so far and I've been desperate for see your feedback, but it seems like you guys just want to read it for fun or something. Nothing back whatsoever. I'm just a little disappointed. This is serious to me and if you guys have any purpose other than helping me out, well thank you, but you shouldn't have offered your assist. I might offended people who I should be grateful for, but I've reached my limit. </p>
<p>Best,
Nick H</p>
<p>@slimsquall, biology0801, hannahmontana, elvis425, Yasmin:
Thank you so much for offering me. But right now, my essay looks pretty nice enough.</p>