My second essay. Help greatly appreciated!!

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys, as the topic states I need help with my second essay. ( the program which I am applying to requires two separate essays.
I really need some help revising/phrasing and finishing this sucker up.
leave message or PM if you'd like to help me out.
Thanks a lot.</p>

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<p>I really need a hand!
Anybody? Please</p>

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<p>bump
Really need someone's help on this. anyone?</p>

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<p>I can do it if you want :)</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>Bump
I'm giving in the essays TODAY!
anybody willing to help?</p>

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<p>I'll critique it. PM me.</p>

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<p>Can someone help me with this essay? I need to cut like 40 words and finish it up ,TODAY</p>

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<p>I'll help you.</p>

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<p>ill take a look at it too. pm me.</p>

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<p>I really could use some more help with these revised drafts. leave a message if you can help</p>