My Second Essay Topic...(personal statement)

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<p>So, im pretty content with my first personal statement. Its about how the Marine Corps helped me find my passion in life. I want my second personal statement to be an achievement...Mainly, being promoted to the rank of Corporal in the Marine Corps. </p>

<p>Now, the first essay isnt all about the Marine Corps. The intro is an action intro of me leading my Marines on an assault. The bodies is about me preparing for the Corps (physically) and how I found my passion.</p>

<p>My second essay is going to be about me being promoted, and all the hard work that led up to that, basically.</p>

<p>So, too much Marine Corps in the statements? Or is it ok to talk about the Corps in both.</p>

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<p>just saying, that your idea seems unique. go for it.
my essay was about my struggles with my disability . it was also about my sister’s tragedy. message me if u want more info ?</p>