My supplement for amherst. Needs reconstruction? :/

<p>I wrote this for an amherst supplement and I'm mind-blocked! Need opinions!</p>

<p>It is not necessary to research, read, or refer to the texts from which these quotations are taken; we are looking for original, personal responses to these short excerpts. Remember that your essay should be personal in nature and not simply an argumentative essay. (250-500 words)
"Stereotyped beliefs have the power to become self-fulfilling prophesies for behavior."
Elizabeth Aries, Professor of Psychology, Amherst College </p>

<p>Help!</p>

<p>Bump. </p>

<p>Same here. T_T</p>

<p>You want to PM to me? I could see if how much reconstruction it needs, if any, and/or give you tips.
Or you didn’t write anything yet?</p>

<p>I’m applying for Class of 2017, but not applying to Amherst.</p>

Please can I get a breakdown of Amherst essay supplement prompt 4

Looks like an invitation to write about some stereotype you had, or people had of you,and how you were affected, or what you learned from it. Did you find yourself acting a certain way when you felt you were stereotyped Did others fulfill your expectations of them? WHAT DID YOU LEARN (how did you change) is what they’re really asking, IMO.

Etc.