<p>Can somebody critique my personal statement? It still needs some work and I need to put some more into it but I just needed some criticism on what needs to be done. Any feedback will be greatly appreciated!</p>
<p>Sure..wanna trade?</p>
<p>i will read. <a href="mailto:tyac.sg@gmail.com">tyac.sg@gmail.com</a> email it to me.</p>
<p>I wouldn't give this Lalala person my essay. She seems to just post in every thread....</p>
<p>bump, i really would like some feedback from you guys that are good with essays... any takers? thanks!</p>
<p>You don't have to give me yours if you don't want, but is anyone willing to look at mine? I really have to cut back the word count.</p>
<p>bump, any takers?</p>
<p>bump, im getting desperate, application is due on the 31st! </p>
<p>any takers, please?</p>
<p>ill help! pm it</p>
<p>I told you I would help.. but I haven't received anything.</p>
<p>bumb, any takers deadline is december 31st</p>
<p>any takers</p>
<p>About 4 people have volunteered... How many readers do you need?</p>
<p>i have not received any feedback, only one person has read it</p>
<p>thanks rosh for the feedback, i couldn't find that person you were talking about. but is anyone willing to read my essay and give me some grammar feedback?</p>
<p>I'll read it. PM me.</p>
<p>bump, deadline is tomorrow? any takers to help. any critique will be greatly appreciated</p>