Need Essay Critique

<p>If anyone would be interested in critiqueing two essays (1 for each school), please let me know and I'll pm you if I am interested. Thanks alot</p>

<p>If you don't mind that I'm a rising senior myself, I'd be happy to.</p>

<p>same here, I can take a look as well.</p>

<p>same here but id be happy to help</p>

<p>you can PM me</p>

<p>I'm in, pm me.</p>

<p>pm me</p>

<p>10char</p>

<p>Rising Senior, i'll give this a shot. pm moi</p>

<p>I'll critique your essay and help you improve it. Just PM it over to me.</p>

<p>PM me please, i can give you some advices</p>

<p>I'd be happy to help, PM me</p>

<p>I'll give it a try. PM me.</p>