will someone critique my essay

College Essays
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<p>Hi. Can someone help me and critique my essay and maybe give me some help on grammar please?</p>

2

<p>Sure, pm it to me.</p>

3

<p>sure.............</p>

4

<p>would love to do that</p>

5

<p>would also love 2 do that.</p>

6

<p>Sure, email me at <a href="mailto:RayAllen333@gmail.com">RayAllen333@gmail.com</a> with college confidential as subject please. Good luck!</p>

7

<p>i will read it if you like. PM me.</p>

8

<p>If you need some essay help send me an ol PM :). I can edit it extremely thoroughly.</p>

9

<p>Spring break...I can take a look.</p>