Need evaluation for my UC personal statement from UCB or UCLA students or officer?

College Essays
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<p>Prompt 1: Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.
I have not completed prompt 2.
I message to you if you appreciate!!!</p>

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<p>I can read it. I am not a UCLA or UCB student, but I was accepted @ both schools last year. I can send you my personal statements too, if you would like.</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to proofread your essay.</p>

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<p>I graduated from UCB and would be happy to read your essays.</p>

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<p>Im a freshman at ucla,ill read you essays if you want</p>

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<p>I’ll read and give you feedback. PM me :)</p>