<p>It is near the final draft. Message me an e-mail because it's about 1300 words long. Personally, I think all the detail is there, but I could get some help on how to make it less monotone/boring and more exciting/entertaining.</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>
<p>a senior in high school?</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read it. PM for my email.</p>
<p>Thank you chippedtea, your comments helped me a great deal! Now that I have reworked it a little, I’m still looking for some people to critique my essay.</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>
<p>I’d be happy to read too if you still need readers</p>
<p>My essay is about 13,000 words long, so you need to message me an email.</p>
<p>1300 or 13000 words? There’s a big difference…</p>
<p>If this is a standard personal statement (for Common App), that’s WAY too long.</p>
<p>The limit is 1,300 words, too. There are four sections that must total 1,300 or less. Sorry.</p>
<p>I’ll read it as well.</p>
<p>Ok, pm me.</p>
<p>If you would still like people to read it, you can also PM me. I can give it a final look. :)</p>