Need some people to critique my Personal Statement.

College Essays
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<p>It is near the final draft. Message me an e-mail because it's about 1300 words long.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

2

<p>i can read it. can you send it to my email <a href="mailto:w1ng_2@hotmail.com">w1ng_2@hotmail.com</a></p>

3

<p>I can read it also. You can email me at <a href="mailto:2kool2nite@gmail.com">2kool2nite@gmail.com</a> or PM me.</p>

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<p>DON’T MAKE IT 1300 WORDS LONG!!! You want it to be under 500.</p>