<p>It's my common essay about how i learned to walk. Any takers? I need people to check style, active voice, basically, everything.</p>
<p>PM to me. I’d be happy to give my opinion.</p>
<p>I’ll read if you’d like :)</p>
<p>If you want a third opinion, PM me. Also include which colleges you will be applying to, or at least how selective they will be (ivies, duke/vandy/washu/Stanford, publics) to get an idea of how competitively has to be.</p>
<p>Sure I’ll give feedback</p>
<p>I’ll read it if you pm it over.</p>
<p>PM and I’ll read!</p>
<p>If you would still like a reader, I’m always up for catching things like active voice and critiquing pretty much everything :)</p>
<p>I would love to read it. Send it on over. I am pretty good when it comes to active voice and grammar as well, so I can take a whack at it! PM me:)</p>
<p>PM it to me(:</p>
<p>also, please send me which school(s) it is for so I can give you a more specific response. :)</p>