<p>Well I'm back at it except I wrote a new essay this time. I used option #2: Recount an incident or time when you experienced failure. How did it affect you, and what lessons did you learn? Help is appreciated!</p>
<p>You could shoot me it if you want.
I’m very good with writing. ( missed only 2 multiple choice on SAT)</p>
<p>PM me the essay and I’ll tell you what corrections you might want to make.</p>
<p>I wrote an essay for the same prompt, and I am an experienced writing tutor, managing editor of my school’s literary magazine, and a prospective English (and stats) major. I’m a freak about grammar stuff, though, so just a head’s up. 
Just PM it to me and I’d be happy to read it! :)</p>