Hello,
I am an international student who is aspiring to attend Notre Dame University in Fall 2017. I would appreciate it if you could be honest (i.e. no need to sugar coat anything) but please explain why I am not able to compete as effectively, if you think that I cannot. Please not that I am aware that my chances of being accepted are low, I would just like to know whether I could still hope for acceptance. Anyway, without further ado, here are my characteristics and scores:
SAT (Out of 2400): 1960
SAT (Out of 1600): 1430
GPA (weighed) out of 4.0: 3.97
Predicted IB score: 40/45
Class Rank: Not reported by school, but definitely top 10% (as a local university offers opportunities for complete scholarship to only the top 10% of our class, and since I got an offer, I believe it’s safe to assume that I am in the top 10%).
Courses (IB Full Diploma):
Higher Levels: Mathematics, Chemistry and Biology
Standard Levels: French, English and History
Non-core curriculum subjects: Theory of Knowledge (A branch of philosophy, sort of)
Notable Extracurricular Activities:
- Volunteer in Refugee Camps (Syrian Refugee Camps) - 1 year
- Volunteer tutor in Palestinian and Syrian Refugee Camps) - 3 years
- Varsity Cross Country team member - 1 year
- Gym and independent fitness - 3 years (with evidence and supervision)
- Independent Swimming (with evidence and supervision) - 3 years
- Evidence of Reading Books, seeking knowledge (I know it’s vague but I exhibit a passion for learning information about new topics, which expands my intellectual horizons drastically). --> This is not really an activity, but I did spent a lot of time into it.
- Tutor and Vice-Leader (the supervisors assumed all major leadership for themselves) - 2 years
- Bridges to Ability: Program in which students help children with mental and physical disabilities - 1 year
- Member and Vice-Leader of Debate Team - 3 years (1 year in Leadership position)
- Cleaning beaches in my local community, and my native country (I am an immigrant in another nation) - 2 years (only during breaks) - Community Service and awareness raising
Total Service Hours: 110 (Estimated by end of year: 150)
Please note that in Grade 9, I was in a different school which did not really encourage or facilitate extracurricular activities which I made sure to mention to my college counselor will consider it while composing my letter of recommendation.
I have a peculiar background, as I moved in to another country, with a different language in Grade 8. I was previously educated in my native tongue before moving to that destination, but I received 5 years of English Education (technically 3 since two were half English half-German). Please note that both my native country and the current country of residence are not in the U.S. so I am entirely international (whether that is supposed to boost or hinder my application). Thus, I had to adjust to entirely different language in different education system, which I think should be valued.
I don’t know if this counts as a plus, but the university visited my High School, which my counselor interpreted as interest for recruitment of students from my High School, on their end.
I am a first generation applicant.
Furthermore, my Common App Essay, and the supplements have received several positive remarks from my counselor, and parents, and excellency remarks from my English teacher.
I finally made sure to show my interest in the university, which I am aware that Notre Dame considers to a limited extent.
Thank you in advance, pardon the length of my post, and if you would desire further information, please do not hesitate to ask.