NYU transfer Essay

<p>I need someone to critique my transfer essay please. I would like an honest evaluation because i think my ideas are really good but I have been told I'm taking a risk in my approach.</p>

<p>Only established posters please</p>

<p>I will review.</p>

<p>I'll honestly critique it. =] (Apps are 100% done btw.)</p>

<p>I wouldn't mind reading it and giving you a critique on your essay. Could you email to <a href="mailto:marc.d.tan@gmail.com">marc.d.tan@gmail.com</a>?</p>