Decision: Accepted - RD
Received likely letter
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2060 (Accidentally sent…yikes) 670 Math, 690 CR, 700, Writing
ACT (breakdown): 34 C - 36 English, 31 Math, 33 Science, 34 Reading, 10 Essay
SAT II: Didn’t send
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0 UW
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 7/530 when I applied, 5th now
AP (place score in parenthesis): AP Lang - 5, AP Physics 1 - 1 (Obviously did not report) Will be taking - Calc AB, Bio, Lit, Stats
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: AP Lit, AP Stats, AP Calc AB, AP Bio, Dual Credit Spanish 5
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Published 4x by HuffPo, 3x by another magazine (once in print), 2x by a literary magazine (once in print)
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Medical club/competition 10-12, 2x State qualifier (Treasurer 11,12), Varsity tennis 9-12 (starting player), NHS, Academic UIL in Literary Criticism and Ready Writing
Job/Work Experience: Worked at a smoothie shop summer 10th through the first part of 11th
Volunteer/Community service: Just stuff through NHS honestly
Summer Activities: Tennis camps, working
Essays (rating 1-10, details): Common App: 8- honestly extremely proud of this. Very personal to my life as a writer.
Community: 8 - I wrote about my friends and how our diversity and quirkiness push me to develop my own individuality and embrace my “weird”
Why Concentration: 6 - Seemed pretty cookie cutter to me, but not necessarily bad
Where I’ve Lived: 9 - I loved this one. I don’t live in the greatest place but I took the opportunity to explain how my home has shaped me into a person who has an insatiable interest for the surrounding world.
Why Brown: 7 - The word count hurt me. It was very personal and genuine, just wish I had a little more room.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: 10 - AP Lang teacher. The absolute best teacher I’ve ever had who continually says that I am one of the best students she’s ever taught.
Teacher Rec #2: 7 - AP Physics teacher. Not my best class, but I felt I pushed myself and I have a great relationship with the teacher.
Counselor Rec: 8 - We definitely have a great relationship.
Additional Rec: None
Interview: Didn’t think it was spectacular, but I guess it did the trick!
Other:
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: Literary Arts/Ethnic Studies
State (if domestic applicant): TX
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: Black/White
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: $180k
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): URM
Reflection:
Strengths: Multi-published author, ACT score, smaller intended concentration, rec letters
Weaknesses: SAT (oops), didn’t take absolutely everything AP/Honors, not a lot of major awards
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: I honestly think my passion and success as a writer dominated my application and showed that I have a strong desire to use my writing to influence. Throughout high school, I never really did anything specifically for the purpose of college admissions - I did what I did because it was interesting to me. I think that’s why I got in, honestly. No, my application wasn’t perfect, but it reflected an extremely intimate image of me, not something I manufactured so that colleges would think I was perfect.
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Accepted everywhere else: UT Austin, TCU, Rice
General Comments:
Before I say much else, I want to tell a little story. Around this time last year, on my spring break, I was laying awake in the middle of the night in a hotel in Providence, just having toured the school of my dreams and paralyzed with the fear of the fact that I may not get in. From that point, I was led to this website, where I devoured every piece of knowledge I could garner on the perfect admissions essay, how to remedy the “mistakes” I made during high school, and basically how to avoid being heartbroken. Needless to say, junior year was not the best time for me. Every test I took, all-nighter I pulled, I was focused on Brown. If I didn’t get in, I was convinced that I would never be anyone, that my future was ruined. And when my anxiety was running especially high, I would come running back to the decisions thread from last year to soothe my pain/remind myself how unsuccessful I am - whatever was fitting for the occasion.
Today at 4:00 exactly, I found out I was admitted. Yet in that space between the end of my junior year and now, I learned a very hard lesson. To be entirely focused on one school - the “dream school” - often does nothing but hurt you. Yes, I learned a lot about the college admissions process, but at a price that almost cost me my mental health. So in that space between, I learned how to get excited about other schools, to be open and willing to accept my mistakes, and ultimately that even if I didn’t end up getting into Brown, that I would be okay. So when I opened that acceptance letter, I was of course ecstatic. Yet I know now that even if it was the world’s fattest rejection letter, I would’ve been okay - something that I never thought I would be able to say a year ago.
To any juniors who are undoubtedly reading this thread, panicked and taking notes like I was, I want to tell you to try to enjoy the process that is about to ensue. My time with it is almost up, and while it has been unbelievably stressful, it can also be one of the most fun times of your life. Don’t procrastinate, don’t get too attached, and always remain true to who you are and who you want to be, as corny as that sounds. Never do something just to impress colleges - follow what you’re interested in, and I promise everything else will fall into place.
To everyone else who was admitted, congrats! To those who were rejected/waitlisted, I know you’re going to end up where you’re supposed to be. Taking the step to even apply to a school like this is amazing in and of itself. For me, I’m not sure if I’ll end up at Brown (I can hear 11th grade me dying at that), but it’s amazing that I have such an amazing option. Sorry for being so melodramatic, but I know what I would have wanted to hear in this position last year. So I guess the best piece of advice to others would be to get off of this decision thread and go follow your passions!
I’m not sure if I’ll be posting much more on this site as this whole insane journey is coming to a close, but for what it’s worth, the advice and encouragement I’ve gotten has been amazing. Apply to schools you love, don’t apply for a name. Don’t compare yourself to others because what’s important is what makes you YOU. At the end of the day, colleges are admitting a person, not a collection of scores and awards, so don’t be afraid to be yourself, no matter how scary/dangerous that may seem. I did, and I’m happy with where I ended up.