Deferred
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2180/2400, 740CR, 710M, 730W
ACT (breakdown): didn’t take
SAT II: 780 US History
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): my school doesn’t have GPA out of 4.0, weighted GPA is 94.21 (unweighted GPA unknown)
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): school does not rank
AP (place score in parenthesis): US GovPol (4), APUSH (5)
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: AP Lit and Comp, Honors Bio, French 1, AP German, Accounting, Human behavior, AP Economics (this course covers Micro and Macro)
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): None, part of National Art Honors Society (NAHS) but idk if this counts
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): varsity women’s fencing (captain), ran a fencing camp for the local children this past summer (organizer), helps out with winter and spring programs that teach the local children fencing (manager), NAHS for two years, Model UN for four years, Race Relations for 2 years
Job/Work Experience: Associate at TJMaxx since Sept 2015
Volunteer/Community service: the summer fencing camp (25 hours), the winter and spring programs (30+ hours), various NAHS activities
Summer Activities: See above
Essays: strong common app essay, chose prompt about solving a problem and I discussed honesty in fencing
Teacher Recommendation: 9/10, i’ve known this teacher for multiple years
Counselor Rec: 8.5+?/10
Additional Rec: 8/10, didn’t mean for this teacher to submit her rec as i wanted her recommendation letter for only one school but it is what it is! i doubt there was anything negative in the letter of course
Interview: N/A
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
Intended Major: International Business for Germany (I’ve been studying the language for six years now)
State (if domestic applicant):
Country (if international applicant): N/A
School Type: Public, one of the top schools in my state
Ethnicity: Chinese American
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: 40-50k
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): minority candidate, woman
Reflection
Strengths: Essay and recommendations, community service, GPA
Weaknesses: Test scores, didn’t show enough interest in school
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Deferred b/c did not show enough interest in school
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: accepted into my ED school so I’m not sweating this deferral too much
Your “Big Red” factor - the most unique thing in your application: my essay probably