**Decision: Accepted to Stern
Copy and pasted for the most part from another post so sorry if the format isn’t exactly the same.
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2150 (superscore) 2120 (highest composite)
1st: Math - 680 Reading - 720 Writing - 670
2nd: Math - 720 Reading - 690 Writing - 710
SAT II: Math 2 - 670 US History - 670
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.71
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 14/207
AP (place score in parenthesis): Calculus AB (3) Statistics (5) Macroeconomics (5) Microeconomics (4) U.S. History (4)
Senior Year Course Load: AP Government, AP Calc BC, AP English, Physics, Spanish 3, band, personal economics and finance, and computer applications
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): AP Scholar with Distinction, but that’s not really major…
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Marching Band 9th-12th (Brass Section Leader 10-12), Symphonic Band 9th-12th (Section leader 10th-12th, placing in district band all three years, 1st chair all county 11th-12th and all-state qualification 11th) JV Soccer 9th, Varsity Cross Country 10th-12th, Beta Club 9th-10th , Varsity Track 10th-12th ( 11th placed in the conference, regionally qualified, and qualified for 3A state track meet for 4x800 m relay team)
Job/Work Experience: Started my own business, was able to raise funding and set to launch very soon. Personally a very big accomplishment but the money raised was nothing crazy. Paid teaching assistant at elementary school, three hours a week senior year only. Volunteer/Community service:
Summer Activities: Research on alternative method of education called SOLE.
Essays: Common app essay was a very personal and emotional background story and explained where my drive came from. Wrote about visiting the Apple headquarters for my ideal intellectual field trip, really liked that essay. For the what I need to make my education whole essay I wrote about my business failures and what I could learn in a specialized program like Mendoza. I thought both were pretty good.
Teacher Recommendation: One from my Stats teacher, he and I really got along and he’s a great person so probably wrote a very nice recommendation. Other from my physics teacher, he liked me because I did very well but I slept quite a bit in his class so I’m really not sure how that recommendation was.
Counselor Rec: Probably pretty generic
Additional Rec: Music teacher and I are very close so probably very good.
Other
State (if domestic applicant): VA
Intended Major: Mendoza
School Type: Public, smallish
Ethnicity: White (Middle Eastern)
Gender: M
Income Bracket: <$25,000
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): None, everything I’ve read said being Middle Eastern doesn’t count as URM.
Reflection: Actually very surprised. I expected Stern to be quite the reach considering their emphasis on objectives and my pretty average test scores and GPA. My essay was pretty good though and I think it displayed my business knowledge so that’s likely what pushed me over the edge.
Strengths: Extracurriculars and essay
Weaknesses: SAT IIs and GPA
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Definitely my unique business experience and essays.
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Accepted: UVa, University of Richmond, William and Mary, and VCU. Rejected: Notre Dame. Still waiting on Ivy Day but fully expecting rejections from Cornell and Penn.
General Comments: I’m very excited! Stern is a great program, New York is such a wonderful city, and barring any miracles occurring on Ivy Day I look forward to studying there this fall!