*OFFICIAL PSAT THREAD 2014 (US)*

<p>Form W people:
When you contact ETS about “unclear” answers, they actually tell you what the correct answer is any why yours is wrong.
Regarding the invention passage, this was part of the first one:
More precisely, the development of new artifacts and new technologies follows from the failure of existing ones to perform as promised or as well as can be hoped for or imagined. Frustration and disappointment associated with the use of a tool or the performance of a system puts a challenge on the table: Improve the thing. </p>

<p>Let’s compare to a small portion of the other passage:
‘‘You can’t understand how important a grain mill is,’’ she says, ‘‘until you’ve spent three hours pounding grain and gotten a cup and a half of flour.’’</p>

<p>This is basically how ETS supports its answers and their reasoning is (to an extent…) valid.
But now I know nearly exactly how many questions I got wrong…
M: 1 (76)
W: 0 (duh)
CR: 4 (75) – (ans. to missed ones were more indignant, vexed, and impromptu)
Other debated ones: passage 2 supports 1, technology v. modern… curve is very kind for CR, not so much for M and W.
This should be good enough for California qualifying, assuming I didn’t make many other random errors. </p>

<p>So the other debated ones you put on there are the correct ones? And how did you contact them? </p>

<p>@Asutosh11 After the test I reported ambiguities for over 10(!) questions. I got a letter back with explanations, questions, and answers, and a short sentence about overall performance because I had inquired about it – To the effect of “Critical reading scores were worse than expected” </p>

<p>@1golfer1‌ - What were the answers to the other questions you asked?</p>

<p>@glasshours I asked about some writing questions
had lain question – no error
from, not to (e.g. “prevented by you FROM (not to) going”)
originally first was redundant
if you got 4 Es it was right </p>

<p>grand canyon was b/c it wasn’t what he expected

  • others above, namely inventions passages: although second article had that “necessity is the mother of invention” title and the first passage refuted that, you 1) could never have inferred that, and more importantly 2) the first author was discussing how that certain viewpoint was wrong – you may think it’s necessity, but it’s actually desire “behind the scenes.”
    the vexed / enraged question is somewhat arguable. ETS called enraged exclamation points and angry speech, which was too strong. </p>

<p>I should have asked about the narrative / reflection one, but I’m pretty sure it’s reflection based on reading how they justify the other questions. </p>

<p>So finally, was the invention passage supporting? Sorry if I’m being dumb I just want a clear answer from ETS </p>

<p>@golfer1‌ for the narrative / reflection, based on what I’m hearing it’s 9:5 for narrative, with my sample size being a little more than 60</p>

<p>@hk9928 it won’t be narrative. I would post the passage but it’s copyrighted – Look up “Don’t shoot the Dog” on Amazon and used the “Look Inside” feature to go to foreword page xii. OVERALL, paragraphs 1 and 2 are not truly a narrative, which would mean that the author told a story of her life. The chronological part doesn’t hold up in the second paragraph, which draws on discrete events from the author’s life. What the author wrote is more analytical and reflective in nature. Chronological narrative would be like this:
"In October, … Next year… Then in September 2009… " <-- Narratives don’t have analysis, they just tell facts.
And just below that paragraph you can see the “solid” question. It should be “genuine.” If the body of theory was “substantial,” or very important (can also mean sturdy / heavily supported… that is very wrong), the implication would be that the theory was well researched by scientists and had backup support. But the theory is instead “largely undescribed (lol, that’s not a word) by science” and is often “misapplied.” If it was big an important, do you think that the theory would have a lot of people interested?The author believes it to be a real, or genuine, theory based on her successful experiences with behavior modification.
I’m wondering if ETS meant to say “SubstantiaTED” for that question? Substantial is just a little bit too close to being correct, but Substantiated is clearly wrong.</p>

<p>Are you 100% sure that the answer is philosophical reflection and “genuine”? I put chronological narrative and genuine. </p>

<p>@asutosh11 I am very close to 100% certain on the reflection one, and about 60% on the genuine. While genuine has one specific definition (actually existing, not made up – think pyschics = not genuine), substantial has several but it generally is used to mean large or big (think substantial importance = of major importance). When discussing the body of the theory, I think the author was mostly bent on proving that it is actually a legitimate field of research that should not be scoffed at.
I tend to go with my guy feeling on questions like these, and during the test I actually thought of genuine before looking at the answer choices.</p>

<p>The passage. I wouldn’t have posted it (since its copyrighted) but there’s a pdf so… not really sure where it ends so yeah…</p>

<p>I first learned about training with positive reinforcement in Hawaii, where in 1963 I signed on as head
dolphin trainer at an oceanarium, Sea Life Park. I had trained dogs and horses by traditional methods, but
dolphins were a different proposition; you cannot use a leash or a bridle or even your fist on an animal that
just swims away. Positive reinforcers—primarily a bucket of fish—were the only tools we had.
A psychologist outlined for me the principles of training by reinforcement. The art of applying those
principles I learned from working with the dolphins. Schooled as a biologist, and with a lifelong interest in
animal behavior, I found myself fascinated, not so much with the dolphins as with what could be
communicated between us—from me to the animal and from the animal to me—during this kind of training. I
applied what I’d learned from dolphin training to the training of other animals. And I began to notice some
applications of the system creeping into my daily life. For example, I stopped yelling at my kids, because I
was noticing that yelling didn’t work. Watching for behavior I liked, and reinforcing it when it occurred,
worked a lot better and kept the peace too.
There is a solid body of scientific theory underlying the lessons I learned from dolphin training. We shall
go considerably beyond theory in this book, since as far as I know, the rules for applying these theories are
largely undescribed by science and in my opinion often misapplied by scientists. But the fundamental laws
are well established and must be taken into account when training.
The study of this body of theory is variously known as behavior modification, reinforcement theory,
operant conditioning, behaviorism, behavioral psychology, and behavior analysis: the branch of psychology
largely credited to Harvard professor B. E Skinner.
I know of no other modern body of scientific information that has been so vilified, misunderstood,
misinterpreted, overinterpreted, and misused. The very name of Skinner arouses ire in those who champion
“free will” as a characteristic that separates man from beast. To people schooled in the humanistic tradition,
the manipulation of human behavior by some sort of conscious technique seems incorrigibly wicked, in spite
of the obvious fact that we all go around trying to manipulate one another’s behavior all the time, by whatever
means come to hand.
While humanists have been attacking behaviorism and Skinner himself with a fervor that used to be
reserved for religious heresies, behaviorism has swelled into a huge branch of psychology, with university
departments, clinical practitioners, professional journals, international congresses, graduate studies programs,
doctrines, schisms, and masses and masses of literature.
And there have been benefits. Some disorders—autism, for example—seem to respond to shaping and
reinforcement as to no other treatment. Many individual therapists have been extremely successful in solving
the emotional problems of patients by using behavioral techniques. The effectiveness, at least in some
circumstances, of simply altering behavior rather than delving into its origins has contributed to the rise of
family therapy, in which every family member’s behavior is looked at, not just the behavior of the one who
seems most obviously in distress. This makes eminent good sense.
Teaching machines and programmed textbooks derived from Skinnerian theory were early attempts to
shape learning step by step and to reinforce the student for correct responses. These early mechanisms were
clumsy but led directly to CAI, Computer-Assisted Instruction, which is great fun because of the amusing
nature of the reinforcers (fireworks, dancing robots) and highly effective because of the computer’s perfect
timing. Reinforcement programs using tokens or chits that can be accumulated and traded for candy,
cigarettes, or privileges have been established in mental hospitals and other institutions. Self-training
programs for weight control and other habit changes abound. Effective educational systems based on
principles of shaping and reinforcement, such as Precision Teaching and Direct Instruction, are making
inroads in our schools. And biofeedback is an interesting application of reinforcement to training of
physiological responses.
Academicians have studied the most minute aspects of conditioning. One finding shows, for example, that
if you make a chart to keep track of your progress in some self-training program, you will be more likely tomaintain new habits if you solidly fill in a little square every day on the chart, rather than just putting a check
mark in the square.
This absorption with detail has valid psychological purposes, but one does not often find much good
training in it. Training is a loop, a two-way communication in which an event at one end of the loop changes
events at the other, exactly like a cybernetic feedback system; yet many psychologists treat their work as
something they do to a subject, not with the subject. To a real trainer, the idiosyncratic and unexpected
responses any subject can give are the most interesting and potentially the most fruitful events in the training
process; yet almost all experimental work is designed to ignore or minimize individualistic responses.
Devising methods for what Skinner named shaping, the progressive changing of behavior, and carrying out
those methods, is a creative process. Yet the psychological literature abounds with shaping programs that are
so unimaginative, not to say ham-handed, that they constitute in my opinion cruel and unusual punishment.
Take, for example, in one recent journal, a treatment for bed-wetting that involved not only putting “wetness”
sensors in the child’s bed but having the therapist spend the night with the child! The authors had the grace to
say apologetically that it was rather expensive for the family. How about the expense to the child’s psyche?
This kind of “behavioral” solution is like trying to kill flies with a shovel</p>

<p>All in all, I do believe it is both reflection and substantial.</p>

<p>@Asutosh11‌ i think it was chronological narrative, as do a lot of the people on the Google docs. I don’t think it could have been philosophical reflection because PSAT requires answers that are 100% correct, and the passage didn’t seem philosophical. </p>

<p>@hk9928 It was only the first two paragraphs, not the whole passage. It also said “most similar to.”
I don’t care what the doc said. It was wrong about the businesslike one.
Was it substantial or substantiated? </p>

<p>The word on the test was substantial. </p>

<p>@1golfer1‌ Even those two passages weren’t really “philosophical”, since the author was simply discussing the path she took to get to where she was. Although you could argue it’s not necessarily the exact definition of “chronological”, the paragraphs definitely didn’t seem philosophical. Also, the paragraphs can be described as a narrative, since a narrative is just a story that happened to a person. Therefore, in concurrence to the wide® majority with the doc, I think it’s a chronological narrative.</p>

<p>How do you guys even remember the questions on the test…</p>

<p>@livelaugh7 Yeah I know, i barely remember taking the test in the first place, much less remember the questions to still argue which answer is right or wrong</p>

<p>So the passages were supporting each other about the invention and the dolphin passage was philosophical reflection?</p>

<p>@meaa7130‌
I think the selection was chronological narrative. Although overall it might have been philosophical, considering those two paragraphs in isolation, I still think narrative is the best answer. The gdocs has more opinions on it as well if you’re interested.</p>

<p>@‌hk9928
where is the google doc?</p>