Oh, the things I do for a shot at the Ivy League. Read My Personal Essay?

<p>I'm considering sending this essay to my reach schools with the hope of it making my application stand out. If you care to know, my stats are decent for ivies: SAT 2220, valedictorian in a class of 126, two varsity sports, various leadership positions, nothing stellar. I need my essay to stand out.
Anyone willing to read it?</p>

<p>I’ll read it London!</p>

<p>I’ll read it, might take a while to get back to you though.</p>

<p>I can take a look at it if you’d like.</p>

<p>I can read it, though it might take me over the weekend to send you what I think of it.</p>

<p>I’ve received some very useful advice, and I no longer feel the need for readers. Thanks guys.</p>