Ok, sooo...

<p>Well, it was disappointing to discover most people on CC thought my essay blows. I guess I'm gonna scrap it for an essay about my love of language and how I made myself literate in Chinese.</p>

<p>Anyway, I have a short 150 word essay about soccer for the activities elaboration on the Common App, anyone wanna take a quick peek? Thanks!</p>

<p>that sounds good.</p>

<p>so you thought that essay sounded good?</p>

<p>Peek, I will take.</p>

<p>PM me.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look</p>

<p>I’ll look at it for you, pm it to me if you want</p>