<p>I spent like hours doing this essay and I think it's really good! Probably one of the best essays I've ever written (considering its length). I think it has really good flow throughout and I tried to imbue it with my passion for the topic.</p>
<p>Post here and I'll PM it to you!!!</p>
<p>Essay Prompt - Tell us about a book, artwork, or lab experiment that changed the way you see the world. What was it about the work that affected you? How did your world become different?</p>
<p>And of course, please give whatever feedback you have!</p>
<p>post then
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<p>I’ll PM it to you…</p>
<p>okay, PM it to me.</p>
<p>PM it to me … I’ll take a look at it and critique it!</p>
<p>PM me, id love to take a look and give any advice i can</p>
<p>anyone else…??</p>
<p>so far only one person has given me feedback…</p>
<p>I will read your essay. Please tell me when you send it what you think it’s weak/strong points are so I’ll have a starting point. :)</p>
<p>Sure, PM it over :)</p>
<p>bumpbump!!</p>
<p>Looks like it has been a few days since you posted, but if you still need help, PM the essay to me. I will read and critique it.</p>
<p>PM me and ill judge</p>
<p>If you still need feedback, I’m a editor at heart and exterior. Send away!</p>
<p>PM me, and I’ll give you feedback and such. :)</p>
<p>OP: Check some of the post histories of the ppl who posted above…obviously essay stealers.</p>
<p>PM me tho.</p>
<p>heyy i would love to read your college essay pm it to me please</p>
<p>PM it to me :)</p>
<p>I’d like to have a look, thanks!</p>
<p>you’re a pretty big talker! I really want to read it now haha</p>
<p>I’ll critique it too</p>