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For example, siginifcant emphasis seems to be placed on eliciting and evaluating the applicant's response to why he or she wants to attend the particular school or believes that he or she fits there. I do not know how my daughter will answer those questions, but I think it will be harder than it might seem. Neither her mother nor I attended either a liberal arts college or an elite university. Although at least purple ourselves, we live in the reddest part of a very red state. Although a strong student who likes learning, my daughter is not unusually "intellectual."
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<p>A couple of comments. First, I don't think that Swarthmore students need be unusually "intellectual". I don't think my daughter was. I suspect I know Achat well enough to guess that she wouldn't have viewed her son that way. I think that the majority of Swarthmore students arrive at college as fairly hard workers in high school, good students, some teachers pets, some "geeky", some intensely committed to an EC interest, some "activists". Not too many prom queens. Not too many captains of their high school football teams. Tend to have run in the "smart crowd" at public high schools more so than the "popular crowd". I think the one shared trait is that most students who come to Swarthmore think that it's "cool" to enjoy their classes. There are some who take themselves pretty seriously, but overall it's a pretty unpretentious student body.</p>
<p>As for the "Why Podunk U?" question. It's really not that hard and it doesn't take that much to stand out. Colleges just want to see that you've bothered to learn something, anything, about what makes them unique and how you would be a good fit.</p>
<p>I really like the way Emory words their "Why Podunk U?" question:</p>
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Many students decide to apply to Emory based on its size, location, reputation, and yes, the weather. Besides these valid reasons to choose Emory as a possible college choice, why is this university a particularly good match for you?
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<p>Here's what Swat's Dir. of Admissions had to say in an interview a couple of years ago, while in the middle of reading ED applications:</p>
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<p>JB: Swarthmore is pretty self-selecting, so scores generally aren't an issue. We want to see a commitment to a few activities, see what your motivations and passions are. There's not really anything in particular - just follow your interests. And of course we want to see a passion for learning, which is why the essay is so important - it helps us go beyond the surface. One student may apply because Swarthmore is a top school, which isn't necessarily bad, but someone else may apply because Swarthmore is a top school AND it has X, Y, and Z. We like to see that a student has researched their choice.
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<p>X, Y, and Z could be anything. I read one essay from someone who wrote about knowing that he would find people at Swarthmore who would be willing to listen to, and debate, his wacky ideas on government.</p>
<p>My daughter took a very simple approach. One night over dinner, we talked about her just completed overnight visit and how much she loved it. I asked what was the one thing that stood out about each person she had met with. For the professor who showed her around the science labs, it was his "enthusiasm". For another prof, whose class she had attended, it was the way she had gotten all of the students debating aspects of the novel in the class. For her student hosts, she had been struck by the fact that they felt like her best friends after one night, they made her feel like she fit right in.</p>
<p>Bingo. The outline of a nice simple "Why Swarthmore" essay that basically wrote itself - X, Y, and Z complete with names and faces to bring it to life. Of course, looking back with hindsight, each of those things turned out to be key qualities of the school and things that she likes even more as a student.</p>
<p>If your daughter likes Swarthmore, or any other school, spend some time talking about what she likes, even the little small stuff. And, then she could just write about those things. She could probably write an effective essay about just about anything, but try to have a little fun with it. Dig around the website. Read some school newspaper articles. If she leans towards an Early Decision app, then doing an overnight visit would probably be worthwhile, just to confirm her decision and come up with ammunition for a killer essay.</p>