<p>Would anyone be so kind to critique it for me? Especially any EDer’s who got in and think their essay was the strong part of their application? </p>
<p>Leave your e-mail!</p>
<p>I'd be happy to critique it for you. I didn't apply ED, but I write pretty well. I don't feel like giving my email, so just PM me.</p>
<p>Sure...
ohangelene#aol.com
(replace # with @, obviously... don't need more spam in my box via webcrawlers)</p>
<p>i was accepted to wharton ED... if u want me 2 critique ur essay id be more than happy 2 just PM me</p>
<p><a href="mailto:pink_heaven012@yahoo.com">pink_heaven012@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>I know I've posted this like a bajillion times elsewhere, but I know my essays were what got me into the College. You can email me at <a href="mailto:manyalasanya@aol.com">manyalasanya@aol.com</a></p>
<p><a href="mailto:dairyman_crick@yahoo.com">dairyman_crick@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>Ok. I feel like being nice :P. hehe. I got into Huntsman ED and did the 217...mine was AWESOME. You can totally PM me and I would be more than happy to critique it for you.</p>
<p>I'll take a look. <a href="mailto:athlonmj@comcast.net">athlonmj@comcast.net</a></p>
<p>To all who responded, you guys are awesome :) I have to change it up a bit, but I will send it out ASAP.</p>
<p>I just sent in my app yesterday, and i really worked hard on my essays. Just PM me and ill look over it.</p>
<p><a href="mailto:cliched_suicide@hotmail.com">cliched_suicide@hotmail.com</a></p>
<p><a href="mailto:signup22@gmail.com">signup22@gmail.com</a></p>
<p><a href="mailto:jack_frost429@hotmail.com">jack_frost429@hotmail.com</a></p>
<p><a href="mailto:perfecte23@hotmail.com">perfecte23@hotmail.com</a></p>